opening sequence draft 4

This is draft 4 for our opening sequence 'Innocent mind' in which we got a level 2A/3C

Teacher assessment sheets for construction draft 4

Here is my Teacher assessment sheet for our opening sequence draft 4


                   

Peer & Self assessment sheets for construction draft 4

These are my Peer & Self assessmente sheets for my opening sequence draft 4 

Pictures of filming construction draft 4

Here are pictures of our group filming for draft 4 of our opening sequence

Planning for draft 4

Here is our planning for draft 4 presentation

Draft 4 planning

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changes made from draft 3 to draft 4 opening sequence

From draft 3 to draft 4 of our opening sequence there some changes made such as :

• The costume of the main character changed from being tracksuits to pyjamas to emphasise her being ill. 
• Her hair was tied back and she was wearing darker eye make-up.
• More shots of the main character studying were added to make it more engaging.
• Added shots of the work and what she was revising.  
• The location was changed to maria's house as there was more space to move the camera around and get better footage. 
• Establishing shots were added to communicate to the audience where it was set.  
• Sound was changed to a more effective and emotional music for the audience to feel more sympathy for the main character. 
• Titles/ credits were changed to the appropriate order, colour and font of our genre.  
• Pace increases up to climax due to the sounds used.  
• Made party flashback more realistic with more people.
• Added point of view shots to show disorientation from the main character.  
• Showed titles/credits throughout the whole opening sequence and not all at once.  
• Added a flashback of the bedroom scene to make it theme clearer to the audience. 
• Used a wider variety a of shots comparing to draft 3.

titles/ credits assignment

This was an assignment set by my teacher in which we had to research different titles/credits from different opening sequence of the same genre as our opening sequence. This helped our group understanding the order of titles/credits and the type and colour of font appropriate to suit our genre.

titles/ credits

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opening sequence draft 3

This is our draft 3 of our opening sequence 'Innocent Mind' in which we got a a level 2B

teacher assessment sheets for construction draft 3

Here are my teacher assessment sheets for my opening sequence draft 3

peer & self assessment sheets for construction draft 3

Here are my peer and self assessmente sheets done for my opening sequence draft 3 

Pictures of filming Construction draft 3

Here are some Pictures taken of us filming our opening sequence for draft 3

Planning for draft 3

Here is our planning presentation for draft 3

Planning for draft 3

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changes made from draft 2 to draft 3 opening sequence

There were some changes made from our opening sequence Draft 2 to Draft three such as :

• The flashbacks were added to the scene where the main character emphasises her emotions after reading the NHS letter.  
• The interior location of the living room was changed due to lack of space and therefore we used another member's (Maria Younes) living room to get better quality footage.  
• The main character starts off by wearing a Hollister top when she is studying and finds our her blood test results, but then she is wearing a different top when she goes to the living room. This was an incident we had to sort out last minute as the top used for draft 2 was not in good conditions for filming. 
• The music we used in draft 2 was not appropriate to create the mood we were looking for from the audience therefore for draft 3 we used a calming piano sound which we found more effective.  
• The bedroom we made it more messy and more books in order to show disorganisation from the main character.  
• Payed more attention to editing and made it more continuous. 
• Got rid of some of the fast forwarding that was used and was not successful.  
• Changed the titles/credits to a font and colour that would be more appropriate for our genre.

Group Meeting log

DATE	TIME	PEOPLE ATTENDED	AGENDA (points to discuss)	TARGETS (outcome of meeting)	DUE DATE/DEADLINE	NOTES
09/03/12	4:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Shots to film Costumes Scenes Props	Decided what shots we wo9uld be using in draft 1, the costumes and the scenes we would film each day.	13/03/12
11/03/12	12:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Film draft 1 of opening sequence	Get all footage needed for draft 1 so could start editing the following day	14/03/12
12/03/12	1:00-1:30 3:20-5:30	Debbie maria milka	Start editing draft 1	Edited draft 1	13/03/12
24/03/12	4:00	Debbie Maria Milka	Film draft 2	Film some footage needed for opening sequence draft 2	28/03/12
26/03/12	5:00	Debbie Maria milka	Film the rest of draft 2	Film the rest of footage needed to complete draft 2 of opening sequence	28/03/12
27/03/12	12:40-1:30 3:30-5:30	Maria milka	Edit draft 2	Edit the whole of draft 2	28/03/12	Debbie was absent this day therefore did not edit
6/04/12	12:00	Debbie Maria Milka	Film footage for draft 3	Filmed most of the scenes shown in draft 3 missing only the flashbacks	17/04/12
7/04/12	3:00	Debbie Maria Milka	Film the rest of footage needed to complete draft 3	Filmed all the flashbacks that were missing in draft 2	17/04/12
11/04/12	9:00-12:30	Debbie Maria milka	Edit footage filmed during the easter holidays	Edited all footage filmed during easter holidays and only missed the titles/credits	17/04/12

opening sequence draft 2 'Caught up'

Here is our opening sequence draft 4 for film 'Caught up' in which we got a level 2B