Friday 23 September 2011

Self-ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT #4

Self-ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT #4 : Horror thriller
Self Assessment:
In this assignment, I think WWW was….
- used PEE structure
- used images to support points
- well labelled - clear
In this assignment, it would have been EBI I….
- use clearer arrows
Record of Grade: In this assignment I would have graded myself with a grade C because i kept the PEE structure and i used images to support my points, used buller points, avoided long paragraphs. overall I received a grade D/C.

Targets to improve: be more specific with points given.

assignment #4

this is my part of the presentation group work about our chosen genres.

Tuesday 20 September 2011

feedback assignment #3

teacher's feedback of what went well and even better if for assigment #3

Self-ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT #3 :

Self-ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT #2 : My Favourite Genre
Self Assessment:
In this assignment, I think WWW was….
- wide range of examples
- set in bullet points
- good analysis on films
In this assignment, it would have been EBI I….
- labelled pictures in a clearer way
- use screenshot images not just the original posters

Record of Grade: In this assignment I would have graded myself with a grade B+ because i used bullet points to throughout my slides to make it clear and used a wide range of film examples. overall I received a grade A.

Targets to improve: Use different arrows to label the images as they were not very clear and turned out to be a little confusing to the audience.

#3 my favourite genre

this is my presentation on my favourite genre :

Saturday 17 September 2011

feedback assignment #2


this is my teachers feedback of what went wall and even better if for my assignment #2

Self- Assessment of assignment #2

Self-ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT #2 : Coursework analysis
Self Assessment:
In this assignment, I think WWW was….
- clearly labelled
- good points
- effective images supporting my points

In this assignment, it would have been EBI I….
- use some colour to attract the audience, was a little plain.
- try to organise slides differently
- when saying my opinion use bullet points and not long paragraphs

Record of Grade: In this assignment I would have graded myself with a grade B- because i tried very hard in making each slide clear to the audience and i used images to support my points in every slide. overall I received a grade B+.

Targets to improve: To improve on this assignment I need to oragnise my slides better by using the PEE sturcture.

#2 coursework analysis

my coursework analysis presentation

Friday 16 September 2011

ASSIGNMENT #1 Blog Analysis


  • Alexa's blog is very organised to see the score of each student from draft to draft.
  • Paul shows targets but not as clearly as alexa .
  • Alexa structures well the step by step of the evaluation which makes it clearer to the reader.


  • Contrastingly Paul does not use steo by step for the evauation but uses a set of pictures to show the sequence analysis made by the group.

  • Very visual , Alexa uses lots of diagrams to get her point across.
  • Differently Paul does not use much visual posts to express his point, he uses more text.

Tuesday 13 September 2011

first impressions

1.      First impressions
a.       Why did you take media?
      Sounds and looks interesting, i also really enjoyed watched some of the students final work and would like to try it out myself as it looks fun but also very academic.
b.      What were your Eng GCSE grades (lit and lang) 
           english lit : B
           english lang : C
c.       What do you like about films?
           in my point of view some films are very useful in my life as you can relate to them and who know sometimes they can help you make some decisions in life. however it is a fun way of seeing life and other people's creativity.
d.      What do you think of the course so far?
          very excited to start the coursework and start getting and giving ideas for the final piece. i also think this course is good as it is very productive and has a lot to do with group work which i enjoy doing.
e.       What do you want to achieve in media studies?
          i would like to gain more confidence with the public and get used to working more in groups, i also think this will help me to gain more responsibilty with the work.