Tuesday, 24 April 2012

changes made from draft 3 to draft 4 opening sequence

From draft 3 to draft 4 of our opening sequence there some changes made such as :

  • The costume of the main character changed from being tracksuits to pyjamas to emphasise her being ill. 
  • Her hair was tied back and she was wearing darker eye make-up.
  • More shots of the main character studying were added to make it more engaging.
  • Added shots of the work and what she was revising.  
  • The location was changed to maria's house as there was more space to move the camera around and get better footage. 
  • Establishing shots were added to communicate to the audience where it was set.  
  • Sound was changed to a more effective and emotional music for the audience to feel more sympathy for the main character. 
  • Titles/ credits were changed to the appropriate order, colour and font of our genre.  
  • Pace increases up to climax due to the sounds used.  
  • Made party flashback more realistic with more people.
  • Added point of view shots to show disorientation from the main character.  
  • Showed titles/credits throughout the whole opening sequence and not all at once.  
  • Added a flashback of the bedroom scene to make it theme clearer to the audience. 
  • Used a wider variety a of shots comparing to draft 3.

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