- The costume of the main character changed from being tracksuits to pyjamas to emphasise her being ill.
- Her hair was tied back and she was wearing darker eye make-up.
- More shots of the main character studying were added to make it more engaging.
- Added shots of the work and what she was revising.
- The location was changed to maria's house as there was more space to move the camera around and get better footage.
- Establishing shots were added to communicate to the audience where it was set.
- Sound was changed to a more effective and emotional music for the audience to feel more sympathy for the main character.
- Titles/ credits were changed to the appropriate order, colour and font of our genre.
- Pace increases up to climax due to the sounds used.
- Made party flashback more realistic with more people.
- Added point of view shots to show disorientation from the main character.
- Showed titles/credits throughout the whole opening sequence and not all at once.
- Added a flashback of the bedroom scene to make it theme clearer to the audience.
- Used a wider variety a of shots comparing to draft 3.
Tuesday, 24 April 2012
changes made from draft 3 to draft 4 opening sequence
From draft 3 to draft 4 of our opening sequence there some changes made such as :
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