Monday, 16 April 2012

changes made from draft 2 to draft 3 opening sequence

There were some changes made from our opening sequence Draft 2 to Draft three such as :

  • The flashbacks were added to the scene where the main character emphasises her emotions after reading the NHS letter.  
  • The interior location of the living room was changed due to lack of space and therefore we used another member's (Maria Younes) living room to get better quality footage.  
  • The main character starts off by wearing a Hollister top when she is studying and finds our her blood test results, but then she is wearing a different top when she goes to the living room. This was an incident we had to sort out last minute as the top used for draft 2 was not in good conditions for filming. 
  • The music we used in draft 2 was not appropriate to create the mood we were looking for from the audience therefore for draft 3 we used a calming piano sound which we found more effective.  
  • The bedroom we made it more messy and more books in order to show disorganisation from the main character.  
  • Payed more attention to editing and made it more continuous. 
  • Got rid of some of the fast forwarding that was used and was not successful.  
  • Changed the titles/credits to a font and colour that would be more appropriate for our genre.

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