evaluation questions

Here are some screenshots of our group's evaltuation questions. Due to the size of the file we were unable to upload it onto youtube.

Opening Sequence Final Draft

Here is our final draft of our Opening sequence called CHANCE in which we got a level 3A

Teacher Assessment Sheet for construction Draft 5

Here is my Teacher Assessmente sheet for construction Draft 5

Peer & Self Assessment sheets for construction draft 5

here is our Peer & Self assessmente sheets for our construction draft 5 

pictures of filming construction draft 5

Here are some pictures taken from when we were filming draft 5 of our opening sequence

planning for draft 5

Here is our presentation showing our plan for draft 5 of our construction

Planning for draft 5

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Group meetings log

DATE	TIME	PEOPLE ATTENDED	AGENDA (points to discuss)	TARGETS (outcome of meeting)	DUE DATE/DEADLINE	NOTES
20/04/12	4:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Film some of the footage needed for drat 4	Filmed mostof the shots needed for draft 4	25/04/12
21/04/12	8:00-10:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Film restaurant scenes	Filmed all restaurant scenes needed for draft 4	25/04/12
23/04/12	3:30-5:30	Maria Milka Debbie	Edit footage for draft 4	Finish editing everything by Tuesday 24th	25/04/12
24/04/12	3:30-5:30	Maria Milka Debbie	Finish editing draft 4	Finished editing draft 4 and ready to get feed back	25/04/12
29/04/12	2:00-7:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Film all footage for final draft	Film footage that was missing	2/04/12
30/04/12	3:30-5:30	Maria Debbie milka	Edit footage for final draft	Edit as much as possible footage for draft 5	2/04/12
1/04/12	1:00-2:20	Debbie Milka	Edit draft 5	Try to Finish editing draft 5 but still missed some final editing	2/04/12
2/04/12	3:30-7:00	debbie	Edited final bits of draft 5	Finished editing finak draft 5	2/04/12

evaluation questions planning draft1

Here is a powerpoint presentation with the planning for our Evalution questions.

Evaluation questions planning

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changes made from draft 4 to draft 5

In draft 4 of our opening sequence we had new ways of improving by applying the following to our draft 5 :

• have a wider variety of shots for the flashbacks
• end the opening sequence with girl on floor crying 
• show audience what the girl is studying 
• have more shots of girl studying 
• show letter to make the information on it clearer
• use better angles in order to make it easier for audience to read what texts say
• if using a long text make sure timing is enough for audience to read it 
• make girl look more ill by the use of mise-en-scene
• pay attention to framing
• make sure that the person having the flashback is in the same position before and after the flashback to make it clear to the audience
• show she is cold by having a blanket and warm pyjamas 
• have girl in different positions when studying to show passing of time
• show clock to inform the audience of the time passing
• show girl before having point of view shots so audience know that the point of view is from the girl
• show titles of studios at the beginning of the opening sequence  
• make titles/credits longer
• show girl kneeling on floor when reads letter
• show slow motion of letter as girl drops it in disappointment
• add more effects of lighting to flashbacks 
• change what girl and friend say during the conversation about the party  

opening sequence draft 4

This is draft 4 for our opening sequence 'Innocent mind' in which we got a level 2A/3C

Teacher assessment sheets for construction draft 4

Here is my Teacher assessment sheet for our opening sequence draft 4


                   

Peer & Self assessment sheets for construction draft 4

These are my Peer & Self assessmente sheets for my opening sequence draft 4 

Pictures of filming construction draft 4

Here are pictures of our group filming for draft 4 of our opening sequence

Planning for draft 4

Here is our planning for draft 4 presentation

Draft 4 planning

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changes made from draft 3 to draft 4 opening sequence

From draft 3 to draft 4 of our opening sequence there some changes made such as :

• The costume of the main character changed from being tracksuits to pyjamas to emphasise her being ill. 
• Her hair was tied back and she was wearing darker eye make-up.
• More shots of the main character studying were added to make it more engaging.
• Added shots of the work and what she was revising.  
• The location was changed to maria's house as there was more space to move the camera around and get better footage. 
• Establishing shots were added to communicate to the audience where it was set.  
• Sound was changed to a more effective and emotional music for the audience to feel more sympathy for the main character. 
• Titles/ credits were changed to the appropriate order, colour and font of our genre.  
• Pace increases up to climax due to the sounds used.  
• Made party flashback more realistic with more people.
• Added point of view shots to show disorientation from the main character.  
• Showed titles/credits throughout the whole opening sequence and not all at once.  
• Added a flashback of the bedroom scene to make it theme clearer to the audience. 
• Used a wider variety a of shots comparing to draft 3.

titles/ credits assignment

This was an assignment set by my teacher in which we had to research different titles/credits from different opening sequence of the same genre as our opening sequence. This helped our group understanding the order of titles/credits and the type and colour of font appropriate to suit our genre.

titles/ credits

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opening sequence draft 3

This is our draft 3 of our opening sequence 'Innocent Mind' in which we got a a level 2B

teacher assessment sheets for construction draft 3

Here are my teacher assessment sheets for my opening sequence draft 3

peer & self assessment sheets for construction draft 3

Here are my peer and self assessmente sheets done for my opening sequence draft 3 

Pictures of filming Construction draft 3

Here are some Pictures taken of us filming our opening sequence for draft 3

Planning for draft 3

Here is our planning presentation for draft 3

Planning for draft 3

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changes made from draft 2 to draft 3 opening sequence

There were some changes made from our opening sequence Draft 2 to Draft three such as :

• The flashbacks were added to the scene where the main character emphasises her emotions after reading the NHS letter.  
• The interior location of the living room was changed due to lack of space and therefore we used another member's (Maria Younes) living room to get better quality footage.  
• The main character starts off by wearing a Hollister top when she is studying and finds our her blood test results, but then she is wearing a different top when she goes to the living room. This was an incident we had to sort out last minute as the top used for draft 2 was not in good conditions for filming. 
• The music we used in draft 2 was not appropriate to create the mood we were looking for from the audience therefore for draft 3 we used a calming piano sound which we found more effective.  
• The bedroom we made it more messy and more books in order to show disorganisation from the main character.  
• Payed more attention to editing and made it more continuous. 
• Got rid of some of the fast forwarding that was used and was not successful.  
• Changed the titles/credits to a font and colour that would be more appropriate for our genre.

Group Meeting log

DATE	TIME	PEOPLE ATTENDED	AGENDA (points to discuss)	TARGETS (outcome of meeting)	DUE DATE/DEADLINE	NOTES
09/03/12	4:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Shots to film Costumes Scenes Props	Decided what shots we wo9uld be using in draft 1, the costumes and the scenes we would film each day.	13/03/12
11/03/12	12:00	Maria Milka Debbie	Film draft 1 of opening sequence	Get all footage needed for draft 1 so could start editing the following day	14/03/12
12/03/12	1:00-1:30 3:20-5:30	Debbie maria milka	Start editing draft 1	Edited draft 1	13/03/12
24/03/12	4:00	Debbie Maria Milka	Film draft 2	Film some footage needed for opening sequence draft 2	28/03/12
26/03/12	5:00	Debbie Maria milka	Film the rest of draft 2	Film the rest of footage needed to complete draft 2 of opening sequence	28/03/12
27/03/12	12:40-1:30 3:30-5:30	Maria milka	Edit draft 2	Edit the whole of draft 2	28/03/12	Debbie was absent this day therefore did not edit
6/04/12	12:00	Debbie Maria Milka	Film footage for draft 3	Filmed most of the scenes shown in draft 3 missing only the flashbacks	17/04/12
7/04/12	3:00	Debbie Maria Milka	Film the rest of footage needed to complete draft 3	Filmed all the flashbacks that were missing in draft 2	17/04/12
11/04/12	9:00-12:30	Debbie Maria milka	Edit footage filmed during the easter holidays	Edited all footage filmed during easter holidays and only missed the titles/credits	17/04/12